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Olympic Persuasive Writing
Olympic Persuasive Writing
Dear Olympic athletes-Staff
I think that runners shouldn’t be taking drugs because you will get banned from the olympic games and get disqualified.Valerie Adams is a New Zealander and she does shotput and the sad thing was that she got a silver medal when she was meant to get a gold medal because the lady that won cheated. The other lady thought that she won but her drug test came back positive after the olympic games and Valerie Adams went home with a silver medal.
More about Valerie Adams
Valerie Adams got a silver medal and next minute a letter come in from the Olympic staff. In the letter there was a gold medal and a note. Valerie Adams was so sad because she didn’t have her time to shine at the ceremony.She didn’t get presented the gold medal and she didn’t get to have a turn on the 1st place stand, and have the New Zealand flag raised while singing our national anthem.
Why runners shouldn’t take drugs
My first reason that runners (everybody) shouldn’t take drugs because they won’t be representing their country well . If you take drugs then you will be cheating and it won’t be fair for other people.When other people are trying and you're not trying then it will be hard for the olympic staff to tell who came 1st,2nd and 3rd .
What should we do about this problems?
You should use Security cameras to keep a close eye on some olympic athletes and runners because they might be taking last minute drugs.
In conclusion
Runners can you please not take drugs because they are bad for you and don’t cheat in the olympic games.It is unfair for other people that take place in the olympic games.
Please take my advice to help the runners in the Rio Olympics Games.
Thursday, August 4, 2016
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